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Mike Miller's avatar

The longer Ganhkran is in the story, the more I worry for them. After all, the arc title is "Random ACTS of Violence," and (ignoring a brick through a window) we've really had one (Although it was a rampage).

Someone asks about Holland as a viewpoint character and you delve into his head again. Gee, thanks. I don't know if this was intended, but, with the subtle reminder of Holland's sexual proclivities, I've decided part of his problem with koth is he can't have naughty/fun time with em.

Then, well... The koth's rampage really WAS "random." As random as a presumed adolescent radicalized by inflammatory rhetoric can be, I assume. Jumping to the US in 2023 for a moment, it's not Donny T and his pals like Roger S who are the long term problem - they're all pushing 80 and will likely die in the next decade. The long term problem are the incels and misfits, the isolated teens who were radicalized by tech-bro dreams, Nazi-sytle propaganda and Q-anon crap. During COVID a bunch of teens (and those adolescent years of hormones, maturing bodies, and changing brains have long been believed to be the most important in one's long term personality growth and development of values) sat at home for two years and got locked into some ugly beliefs... And they will be the ones trying to flex their growing power in 10 years.

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Vanessa Glau's avatar

Yep, Holland continues to be icky. Ganhkran's POV turns from lovely (what a nice & kind being they are!) to... very sad. As a writer, I really love what you've been doing with perspective & viewpoint around these tricky topics lately! It feels real enough to cut.

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