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Of COURSE no one stopped the train. That wouldn't let the next complication happen. I imagine a quite large bomb in the portal station can fuck up three worlds at once. Hopefully your world doesn't have small tactical nukes... You won't do a nuke. That would truly make the London station unusable for a few centuries.... It's rare to root for Holland in a scene. Despite the title of the chapter the author coyly avoids spelling out the actual plan. Tease! You obviously did your space elevator research. Extra scene cuts - instead of the usual two-per-chapter - does ratchet up the intensity of the intercutting action. Look forward to the final drawing of the megaship. Nice hull details so far, and it's a very clean silhouette.

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