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Sam Reid's avatar

Some of this reminds me of something Laird Barron said in an interview about his writing. He talked about treating the environment as a character with its own feelings, actions, sense of other characters, patterns of behaviour towards them/itself and the wider world around it. Helpful practical tips thanks!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

I am not sure that the best brunch and a bacon sandwich is an either/or option.

Great rundown on things to do when stuck! I’d add “random writing prompt drawn out of a bag” because it starts the flow of writing if nothing else (and might be worth hanging onto for later in the story).

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Elise Manion's avatar

Thank you for posting this... I'm currently "stuck" and I've tried location and ways of writing switcharoos... I didn't think about doing a deep character dive into the senses, or even writing mundane aspects of the character's day. Very helpful.

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Simon K Jones's avatar

I hope it helps! Good luck!

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James Kinsley's avatar

Some great tips here, Simon.

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Simon K Jones's avatar

Thanks, James.

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Shawn Emhe II's avatar

Thanks for this, saved for reference. I like the sensation technique. I've played with it in a few exercises and should probably use it more.

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Bruce Landay's avatar

Lots of good tips to keep moving forward. Sometimes a nudge in the right direction is all that’s needed.

Thanks for the push to keep the words flowing.

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Ted Leonhardt's avatar

Thanks for this, Simon. Thoughtful and useful as always. Typed my name into the Meta pirated search and found an article of mine, and a colleague, had been used to train AI. Amazing. Thanks for that, too!

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Ivo Ziskra's avatar

Great article! A lot of helpful tips to get unstuck.

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Mike Miller's avatar

I mean, yeah, good tips.

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Shannon W Haynes's avatar

Great article! I just released a chapter Saturday morning that started as a blank page the week before. I began writing by describing the light hitting tables in a cafe (the irony)! All good tips, most of which I have employed almost automatically—because when you have to get it down you try everything.

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David Perlmutter's avatar

Several of my books are in the LibGen generator, which sucks. So I used the Author Guild's template to send them a cease and desist message. Hopefully I can get some money when that class-action lawsuit thing goes forward...

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cyberwyrd's avatar

Thanks for this. Saved it. There ARE useful tidbits on Substack. Got a question for you, Mr. Serializer, from an aspiring one. Is there somewhere on Substack where I can find its copyright poicy, procedures on how to link, and other such technical matters?

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Simon K Jones's avatar

Yup. You would have seen the T&Cs when signing up, but you can get to them at any time from the main account menu. https://substack.com/tos?utm_source=user-menu

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cyberwyrd's avatar

Thank you so much this. It’s going to upgrade my Substack experience immensely. Are Diana Gabaldon style sex scenes allowed on Substack? I used her how-to manual. Standards vary widely and I don’t want my first chapter to banned for obscenity.

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Simon K Jones's avatar

Hi! I’m actually not sure. Probably worth checking the T&Cs. And it will likely depend a lot on the specifics of what you write.

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