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Ok, the SECOND streak - I was not expecting Probably Better to enter atmosphere. I guess they've decided stopping the SDC crew is worth breaking cover. That's bad. I mean, I'd already figured they could do orbital bombardment, which is bad enough, but if they're going low... Again, I see possibilities for action, ranging from just shooting up the portal station at close range to dropping a strike team of shard bodies. That's before getting clever with the thinking.

Speaking of possibilities, Justin just powering along despite taking hits was my low probability option. That said, you've been vague about tech, which includes weapons, so we don't know if Probably Better was using (singly, or in combination), lasers, plasma, particle beams, dumb projectiles (kinetic weapons from chemical propellant to Gauss acceleration, or beyond), smart projectiles (including missiles), or something else. I can see how a turbulence and plasma wake would counteract the giant arrow. The wake makes the targeting easy, but I'd assume the continuous shifting of turbulence and temperature gradient caused by roiling plasma is something even a quantum AI can't compute and compensate for, and you don't need much deflection to turn a cabin-hitting shot into an engine hitting shot. Pretend I dropped in a few more paragraphs of example case-by-case. I'll spare you the tedium.

Excellent decision to jump into a new random bystander! Besides managing to make the dude instantly likable, it's a good shift to show the collateral damage a supersonic re-entry can do to nearby population centers, as well as, in general, getting the "camera" somewhere that isn't a close up on a protagonist. So... I guess I agree with your author's note.

Congrats on the new job. *Runs off to read about CPEC* Do you remote in or commute? Given the Global team I'll assume remote.

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