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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

I am oddly interested in Ganhkran's tie style. Myself I hate the things and only wear them when necessary: job interviews, formal occasions, etc. Are they a single-color power tie kind of koth or do they favor different designs, stripes or dots or whatnot?

More topical, I wonder if Jones would've shot the koth anyway regardless whether he moved or not. Maybe I'm paranoid, but I wonder.

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Vanessa Glau's avatar

Excellent chapter! You had me wondering who was going to get killed this time almost every single paragraph.

It's interesting to me that you openly address the gender/bias/racism theme here. Yes, I picked up on the pronouns & saw what you were doing (possibly because I have to pay attention to pronouns in my day job, I might be unusually well-educated in that regard). As an author, I would've just said nothing & let the chapter stand on its own. As they say, all publicity is good publicity... Then again, I'm in the habit of adding content warnings to my stories & it's definitely safer to make things clear.

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