Simon, I appreciate your author's note, with its comment about world-building and character-deepening in this episode. Working in serial shorts now, I'm seeing that we're constrained by the delivery method: weekly segments, short enough to keep the reader's attention but long enough to do what the story demands. (Dickens wasn't and Trollope didn't deliver to somebody's inbox.) It's a challenge.
Thanks so much for showing love for Dust On The VCR, Simon!
Simon, I appreciate your author's note, with its comment about world-building and character-deepening in this episode. Working in serial shorts now, I'm seeing that we're constrained by the delivery method: weekly segments, short enough to keep the reader's attention but long enough to do what the story demands. (Dickens wasn't and Trollope didn't deliver to somebody's inbox.) It's a challenge.
I enjoyed this episode. Thanks!