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Simon K Jones's avatar

Thanks to everyone who has read this opening - I'll see you next week.

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Aine McMenamin's avatar

I thoroughly enjoyed this first chapter and look forward to reading more.

I kept feeling that Sally was more Dickensian than 70's with her voluminous skirts etc! (Now I think of it I need to go back and double-check which century that bit was...) The grimness of London and the Thames was really vivid.

I was totally immersed, I enjoyed the AI, and the unfortunate fate of the spell caster.

Nice to have the fantastical element mixed with the SF. Great scene-setting!

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