I suppose when/if you do a re-edit you can give Morgan and Ford a couple more lines at some point earlier on. I confess, I remembered the names, but had no clue if they were more sympathetic towards the story's villains or heroes.
This is one of those chapters which either confirms for a reader they were on the right track with the clues 🙋, or is the face-palm of "Oh THAT'S what's going on!"
For world building, it's important exposition of "who's been told what?"
But the important question is, "did Miller sign his own death warrant?" Readers know there are still cabal-friendlies-and-dupes inside the Met...
Hell, when the lights flickered in the cell I was worried the Rogue AI would bust in wearing it's T-800 shell and execute Miller right there.
When your conspiracy involves people placed so highly from all three worlds that "closed" portal ain't...
I suppose when/if you do a re-edit you can give Morgan and Ford a couple more lines at some point earlier on. I confess, I remembered the names, but had no clue if they were more sympathetic towards the story's villains or heroes.
This is one of those chapters which either confirms for a reader they were on the right track with the clues 🙋, or is the face-palm of "Oh THAT'S what's going on!"
For world building, it's important exposition of "who's been told what?"
But the important question is, "did Miller sign his own death warrant?" Readers know there are still cabal-friendlies-and-dupes inside the Met...
Hell, when the lights flickered in the cell I was worried the Rogue AI would bust in wearing it's T-800 shell and execute Miller right there.
When your conspiracy involves people placed so highly from all three worlds that "closed" portal ain't...