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Dungeon Mistress's avatar

Love her confidence! The “then in the morning” just assuming it as a thing.

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Mike Miller's avatar

Helps to remember to comment, doesn't it?

Ok, I think I can stop worrying about Lola for now. No way you're cruel enough to drop in a "She died five years ago" revelation. Which doesn't mean bad things didn't happen, of course.

"Port of call..." I'll call that a B5 reference, and enjoy the following, "marketplace of ideas."

With your time skip, it doesn't hurt it's coming off a flashback. You timed skip 200 back, came forward a century and more with Sally, then jumped five years on the "present." Smoothly done.

Aw, Clarke is gonna get some.

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