Ok, bonus chapter, so take this with a grain of salt, but, a theoretical second draft for a full ebook should lose or revamp this. Prior bonus chapters still had a twist to make it narrative, this is the author sharing character bios as a teaser and enjoying his (Makehuman?) art. Wasn't even gonna comment on this one.
But the missing "Next Chapter" button needed pointing out.
Point taken: I think this would make more sense in the form of an advert that they might stick up outside a tavern, or on a street corner, or send to the leaders of a city state, to drum up some business.
What happened to Chapter 25? Can't access it when I select the "next chapter". Got Chapter #32 but missing #25 through #31.
Hi Katherine! Not sure what happened there. I've updated the 'next chapter' link and you should be able to get to #25 here: https://simonkjones.substack.com/p/25-the-creature-part-3
Ok, bonus chapter, so take this with a grain of salt, but, a theoretical second draft for a full ebook should lose or revamp this. Prior bonus chapters still had a twist to make it narrative, this is the author sharing character bios as a teaser and enjoying his (Makehuman?) art. Wasn't even gonna comment on this one.
But the missing "Next Chapter" button needed pointing out.
They are cool renders.
Point taken: I think this would make more sense in the form of an advert that they might stick up outside a tavern, or on a street corner, or send to the leaders of a city state, to drum up some business.
Well... Speaking of adverts in taverns...
Ha, I'd forgotten about this exchange! (or maybe it lodged in my brain somewhere)
See, foreshadowing. Even I don't see it coming.