Being that Holland, for all his faults, is a good detective, I imagine he's caught on to something; Collins seems a bit too confident not to be up to no good.
No real comments this week, other than you gave Collins, Crabbe and Rexan a couple of nice character bits - and that it's no accident a guard whose only line is "I'll fuck up your day," is named "Crabbe." Not sure where you're going to take this one.
There's always that thing of wondering if I'm being too obvious, or too obtuse, and basically having to just guess at where to aim the target. Interesting quirk of detective stories that I've not really had to deal with before in my other books (other, than, say, the central mysteries in TMC and NAA, I suppose).
Being that Holland, for all his faults, is a good detective, I imagine he's caught on to something; Collins seems a bit too confident not to be up to no good.
Indeed. Clarke and Holland make for an unexpectedly good team, despite everything.
No real comments this week, other than you gave Collins, Crabbe and Rexan a couple of nice character bits - and that it's no accident a guard whose only line is "I'll fuck up your day," is named "Crabbe." Not sure where you're going to take this one.
There's always that thing of wondering if I'm being too obvious, or too obtuse, and basically having to just guess at where to aim the target. Interesting quirk of detective stories that I've not really had to deal with before in my other books (other, than, say, the central mysteries in TMC and NAA, I suppose).