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The plot thickens! So Lola's the Palinor expert? I wonder who the Max-Earth expert is? I know almost next to nothing about quantum computing, so it wouldn't be me for sure.

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Spent part of the chapter worried about Clarke, but it looks like he's going to pull himself together sooner rather than later. Good man, not letting his grief and guilt totally overwhelm him.

My first thought on the chain brand was a slave-mark... Well, our cops are saying "prostitute," but I guess if a pimp brands the girls, they're slaves. Ugly.

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