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Simon K Jones's avatar

Thanks for reading!

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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

"Everyone kept telling her not to worry.

Lola was beginning to worry."

I get that; I know that feeling well. I like Lola's introduction here, and the way you described Clarke particularly; it's quite vivid. The grayness really works, I think.

I'm curious as to what an aen'fa actually is; I have an idea of what a koth looks like, but so far I don't know that I've seen overmuch about the aen'fa, except that they bloat in water. I'm definitely looking forward to more about them!

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