All is not as it seems
One-quarter of a Brownie point for Holland for making a good point in this instance although not being a nice individual.
Stating the obvious, I suppose, but I'm guessing Kaminski lied in that last bit about Miss Field being awake.
Typos:
"crushing the can an..." And.
"He rubbed his hands together swiftly, trying to warm the up." Them.
I had some thoughts on Holland, but you hit them all in your author's note, so, yeah. Agreed.
One-quarter of a Brownie point for Holland for making a good point in this instance although not being a nice individual.
Stating the obvious, I suppose, but I'm guessing Kaminski lied in that last bit about Miss Field being awake.
Typos:
"crushing the can an..." And.
"He rubbed his hands together swiftly, trying to warm the up." Them.
I had some thoughts on Holland, but you hit them all in your author's note, so, yeah. Agreed.