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Somehow I'm not surprised that there was a camera on Holland. The question is who's watching and why? Hm.

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A lot to unpack here.

In a crime story the reader is often primed to a predisposition to look for the problem with any non-protagonist character, so, with the use of Daryla as a viewpoint character, nice to see she's benign. Yup, I suspected her of wrongdoing.

Mini portal in the zoo. Heh. That's the official story, anyways. I'm tripling down on Max-Earth genetic alteration. I don't buy a fundamentally magic creature having accelerated growth cycles from the environment of a non-magic dimension.

Hey, hope Lola gets that job! Doesn't hurt that a Princess is pining for her. Do I detect a love triangle being set up?

You had your chance, Holland. You fucked around (literally, in this chapter), and will, soon enough, find out. Jeez, dude, you can't even pick the proper position for a good rage-fuck with a mirror, which is so obviously "doggie."

Justin moves closer to an ugly surprise...

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