"The world was a bin on fire and they were standing in it."
Oh, I like that line, maybe because I've had that feeling myself sometimes.
Since I started in the middle I caught the use of "they" for the koth; I'm fascinated by this herb though. Is it a Mid or Max thing? Who supplied it? Questions, questions, questions!
Thanks for reading!
"The world was a bin on fire and they were standing in it."
Oh, I like that line, maybe because I've had that feeling myself sometimes.
Since I started in the middle I caught the use of "they" for the koth; I'm fascinated by this herb though. Is it a Mid or Max thing? Who supplied it? Questions, questions, questions!
Really engaging story so far and the writing voice is spot on for the prose, narration, and characters. Great job!!
Sally. The koth's name was Sally.
Poor ol' thing likely deserved better, so I'll hope whoever set them up will be brought to justice as the narrative continues.
Or you'll kill the perp, like everyone else in the story.