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Earlier we discussed you not reveling in sex and violence, but not shying from it. Same with the racism. Here's where I consciously noticed you've not invented epithets. No "pointy's," "elves," or "Spocks," for aen'fa or "Komodos," "smokers," or "bat-boys" for koth. No "Whaddya call a billion dead Markab?" "jokes."

And I ain't encouraging it.

"Watch Your Language" is a very different sitcom on Mid-Earth.

Wasn't 100% certain Zoltan knew Nisha had been sleeping with Callahan. Yup.

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Yeah, and I think most of our main characters wouldn't generally use that language anyway. Clarke maybe, unconsciously, but you can imagine Styles' presence and influence making him think more carefully.

Frank Holland, meanwhile, is a prime candidate for some discriminatory language, though he's been mostly a background player so far.

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