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G. M. (Mark) Baker's avatar

I like your version of The Mechanical Crown cover the best by far. The Wattpad version is clearly playing off the portrait of Queen Elizabeth on the money circa 1970. That will, of course, be lost on American audiences, and the younger of her subjects as well. (Or maybe that is unintentional, though the similarity is striking.) The downside of your cover from a marketing POV is that it does not include a human face, and I suspect that is a significant factor in their design approach. Faces, particularly young pretty female faces, draw the eye.

Getting human faces on a cover is a problem for those of us who design our own covers, particularly so when our subjects are Anglo-Saxons of the late 8th century. Finding stock pictures of faces that don't show modern clothing, makeup, or hairstyles is almost impossible. People writing about later periods may be able to find paintings they can use (as I have done with the cover for Lady Isabel and the Elf Knight), but there is nothing for the Anglo-Saxon period except sketch-like schoolbook illustrations. The art of the period tends to be cartoonish in its depiction of faces.

As far as giving up control to publishers, I broke with my was-to-be publisher over matters of style. They were very accommodating over the cover design. I was consulted all the way and ultimately they executed a cover from an idea of mine. I wish I could have used it. Where they would not accommodate me was in much more mundane matters of style. I am a great lover of prose rhythm, but I have learned that a good percentage of the population is completely deaf to it. Prose rhythm is achieved by the use of grace notes, word choices, and playing with the order of words and clauses. They wanted to reduce it to plain business English, and no amount of pleading or protestation on my part could make them see that they were ruining the rhythm. I can only assume that they simply could not hear it. More on that journey here: https://www.storiesallthewaydown.com/p/in-which-i-part-company-with-my-publisher

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I delighted my first publisher when I told him that I had no thoughts whatsoever about a cover image for Playtime's Over. His relief was palpable, and he went on to explain that so many authors show up with ideas of what they want their cover to look like and most of them are terrible (I don't say this to judge yours, I actually prefer yours for The Mechanical Crown to Wattpad's).

I do personally, though, subscribe to the principle of 'stay in your lane'. I consider myself a writer, so when the time comes for discussion with my new publisher about the cover for my next book, I'll tell her exactly what I told my first publisher - I've no input to offer. I'm no designer (as anyone who's seen one of my self-published titles will tell you). I'll do the words, you fill your boots when it comes to the picture on the front.

And as you said in your article, a lot of that comes from appreciating the experience of the professionals you're dealing with. A publisher almost certainly has a better idea of what will sell a book than I do. I barely credit myself with the knowledge of how to write one - the processes after that are a dark art to me.

I'm equally bemused by those writers who get so caught up in adaptations of their work, positioning themselves as the source of all wisdom when it comes to how their work should play out onscreen. The idea that what makes a good book is the same as what makes a good tv show is ignorance (albeit one shared by audiences - people who complain that the tv show isn't like the book are idiots, if you want it to be exactly the same as the book, read the book). Different mediums tell stories in different ways, that's why we have different mediums. If, as an author, you've successfully created your story in prose, why automatically assume you're the only one who can tell it on screen? It's folly.

Not to say there aren't great adapters of their own work, but it's unlikely to be true in most cases. For me, I'd rather let someone else get on with all that and get back to my keyboard...

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