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Vanessa Glau's avatar

Amazing how everything that happened earlier comes together here! As a reader, I had a ton of fun with this chapter, as a writer, I'm in awe of the complex plot you've woven over months & years. Makes me want to further hone my own writing & plotting abilities so I can attempt something similarly complex & awesome one day!

Mike Miller's avatar

Ok, yesterday's comment didn't post... What did I say? Hmmm...

Ok.

Love holding Lola's remembering of Clarke's quote until the end of the chapter. I admit, I was wondering which one.

Oh, dear -- FUSING to PB and ending up on Mid-Earth? Assuming Lola lived (and I continue to hold out for living but having her vaen'ka ability burned out), she's gonna need another set of new limbs. Unfortunately, there's plenty of donors around.

One only hopes CLARKE didn't get killed when two megaship hulls slammed into Mid-Earth again.

Had a feeling Erik's last attack did something significant. He'll never know he was key to victory.

Now, do megaships maintain non-volitile memory storage (Max-Earth flash RAM)? If so, well, PB's should be removed and jumped up and down on in heavy boots for a long while... Just Enough's? May be able to recover more than whatever's in Justin. I feel the megaships run more on active memory and real-time network streams, I just think it's likely most of Just Enough is gone. They made a very real sacrifice.

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