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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

A Max- Earth lawyer? Now that fascinates me. Also the Subcontinent Freedom movement. I think I know what that's about if I remember my geography right, but I could be wrong...

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Mike Miller's avatar

Holland is never pleasant to be in. Fortunately, as the nice guy you are you never revel in his mindset, but, in some ways the subtlety makes it/him worse. Yup, I'm referring to the back-to-back paragraphs of disgust with cultural trappings, but being a "connoisseur" of skin shades. Ugh. Slimy.

"And then he’d be on his own again."

Right. I've been so excited for Lola returning to Palinor (septuple-time for "descended from Palinor!"), that I haven't considered the impact on her co-workers, so that one-line paragraph was a quick punch in the feels. While Triverse is largely written as an ensemble, in many ways I've latched onto Clarke as our "protagonist," and I don't want the old man to suffer more emotional shocks.

Any other comments or observations I'd have made thus week you touched in the Author's Note, so I'll just smile and nod at "techno-mage," and agree about SF/Fantasy having value in its ability to serve as allegory for real world issues, c.f. original Star Trek, Doctor Who (especially the Graham Williams years) and, as always, Babylon 5. I guess this arc is going to end up being the most uncomfortable in Triverse so far, and you've already broken a teen girl's pelvis during a sexual assault.

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